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Script Feedback

 Hi! In todays post I will be reacting to the feedback of my script rough draft. I got many positive reviews on my script, which was shocking to me because I felt like my script wasn't the best I couldve made it. I am quite happy with those comments because it makes me feel more confident with the execution of my script and how it will turn out once I start the filming for it. For my final and completed script I am going to want to add maybe some more dialouge because there isnt that much dialogue. I am very excited to begin filming for my movie. And I thank all the people that gave me the feedback on my script.

Rough Draft of movie script

  The Stalkers SCENE 1: DRIVING IN THE RAIN AVA: I really hope this rain clears up before this afternoon. AVA sees three kids standing in the rain, two older boys and one girl, waiting for their bus. AVA: Those kids probably need a ride. She checks the time . AVA: But I can't be late for work today, maybe someone else will give them a ride. As AVA drives off, the three kids stare at her, menacingly. AVA notices but doesn't think much into it. SCENE 2: AFTER WORK When AVA arrives home, she sees the three kids, who happen to be her neighbors, from this morning playing in their front yard. AVA: * to herself * I wonder if they got a ride this morning. She rolls down her window. Hey, kids! Did you guys get a ride to school this morning? The kids look at her with a terrifying look on their face which unsettles AVA but she thinks nothing of it and continues on. She then goes inside and gets ready to go on her afternoon walk. AVA starts her walk but as she's walking she feels like ...

Elevator Pitch

 Hello readers! In this post, I will be writing my elevator pitch for my movie. This movie is entitled " The Stalkers ". Ava is on her way to work one morning when she notices three kids waiting the rain. Instead of offering them a ride she drives past them because she cannot be late for work. But little does she know, those kids will remember this for a long time. As days go by Ava feels like she is constantly being watched, she tries not to let it get to her though. She is constantly hearing noises near her house that get louder and louder. Will she be able to figure out what the noises are or will she run out of time and meet an end and find out what has been casuing those noises?

Film Opening conventions

Hello! As mentioned in my previous blog post I will be making a movie using the psychological thriller genre. With that being said I will need to incorporate some of the conventions I mentioned in the PowerPoint I created. The first two minutes are going to be the baseline for the continuation of the movie I would be creating.  For sound, I will need to incorporate the use of diegetic sounds as well as non-diegetic sounds. These sounds will be used to show suspense and show emotion for the characters portrayed in the movie.  For cinematography, I am going to be using close up shots as well as over the shoulder shots. The over the shoulder shots will be used to capture things the main character cannot see. The close up shots will be used to allow the viewers to only see what is in front of them. For editing, I will be using fades to fade from one shot to the next. As well as jump cuts between locations and between characters. And finally for mis en scene, I want to be able to c...